Friday, October 10, 2008

What would I change

One thing i would changd in my book is when he gets his powers. I would to change this beacuse it kills me when you already know what is going to happen. I would make him get his powers right then and there so you don't have to read the pointlessstuff about how he gets them when he is about to die. I think it would make the book better beacuse you would want to see what he is going to do with his powers a lot sooner.

4 comments:

☼X§Marvin§X☼ said...

yeah i hate it when books are so predictable

Josh Humble said...

yeah i be hatin when it do dat and when dey make you read and read before it get good.
lol
duce

E S B said...
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E S B said...

yeah when you know what's going to happen i has no pazzaz to it. I recommend saying what the powers are since that might get me to read the book. By the way your spellings gotten better. Thanks.